@vicorva The problem is I completely changed the theme of the story. And I did not have a good conclusion. It was a mess. About half of it I can use. I plan to do something with it soon. I really liked the story idea.
@MOTT I mean that just sounds like a normal first draft to me (so perhaps my first drafts are particularly bad). It's great that you have some of it you can use!
@MOTT how could you do better? That sounds AMAZING