" Be the change you wish to see "
--> not so clear

" Choose by your actions to see change "
--> clearer

I'm quite happy with that - more variations welcome

The phrase was bothering me for every now and again, especially when used as a mottos or a phrase inside conversation or counter-point -

This clarity helps phrases out of socially parroted good-feeling sentiments into a phrase that *says what it means a bit more clearly* like the action because to be or being or becoming the change is not so clear.... or at least helps to say in many more ways...

You got any idea about " Be the change " or " Be the change you wish to see " ?