My brain is hurting from trying to get this paper into shape. I disagree with some of the suggestions that have been made, others make more sense and I have snipped whole paragraphs out. I have managed to come up with a better acronym, but I’ve had to insert a small section to justify one of the letters. I wish I could sit in a room with my manager (my main coauthor) and discuss it in person instead of passing drafts around like this #AmWriting #AcademicChatter