An interesting essay on the unreadability of scientific papers.
https://worksinprogress.co/issue/the-elements-of-scientific-style
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I was delighted to discover that this classic 1990 piece on clear scientific writing was reposted as a blog in 2018. I have referred to my dog eared pdf version many times. It demonstrates and explains practical hints for diagnosing and fixing obfuscation.
https://www.americanscientist.org/blog/the-long-view/the-science-of-scientific-writing