@Noupside Just saying the end part almost sounds like you are telling us - from the "Why?" part - so reading it in full you can see you're talking from Elon's point of view but careful of the confusion of who is writing (yourself) and who you mean in unquoted terms... A lot of bad news can work because people are not sure who is saying what or what the person writing means from someone else's perspective... so the "Why?" could be sounding from you. (Adding "from their perspective / Elon thinks" makes it much clearer / seperates you and his perspective or story)