I'm honored to be endorsed by my friend and colleague, District 9 Supervisor Hillary Ronen. Hillary has been an unstoppable force fighting on behalf of working families in her district ever since she took office. I'm grateful to have her support in my re-election!
Picture edit - a different version + notes to have a look at it's benefits...
@deanpreston Hi there
I like the original picture but thought I'd show a different version and it's benefits in this post - and ask what you think too!
Notes are given towards measured improvement (if you agree) and some might be my taste but I think can be more measured for each change...
So the notes if interested are:
➡️ Original picture was good but it was unclear who / which person it was about - big fonts for two people and picture of someone else
i.e. almost an ad for Hillary and with picture of girl. So the brain is forced to take time about that to then see your name (but not your face) somewhere and work out what it's for !
➡️ So I added your face there! Seems obvious but also I considered you might not want your face there - I think your profile pic is ace so that's perfect in my opinion.
➡️ Wasn't sure instantly what it was about looking at picture so your picture NEAR "for supervisor" makes this a point in itself worth having in picture. Where i can see you going for that position...
➡️ Some of the size and colours
➡️ Reduced vertical size, mostly the picture of lady - she is holding a sign which is actually two signs high! So I made it just 1 sign not two
So this all solved the look vertically plus few minor things
➡️ - quote in it's own quote box I made quickly
➡️ - white line horizontal underline- not essential but seemed to make a news style visual and even separate the main title with quote (who's name is smaller you see usually on screen)
