@MooseAllain Also think it's fine as it is but like @pseudomonas / Adam's post and especially the part to consider having a style for captioning which might not need a total change or relearning.

Try even different hand position or even just bigger font (lots of comics have so you can read even from thumbnail or wordpress reduced image size,

Either way I like that it's from you.

P.S People don't usually complain or want to correct / risk saying things . use their time constructively - so I wouldn't gage things on that so much for feedback (people don't complain directly even if done wrong over money etc!). Just my observation that I risk it and that's why I have no friends but tell the true of reasoned sorts... 😃