@framasoft
The vocabulary and script could have been a little simpler and clearer. Introducing and mixing words like "exchange", "provider", "login", "federation", "universe", without much context or definitions inbetween them is very confusing for a non-tech person.

I think we spend so much time as developers that we can sometimes assume most people understand what we say. I know for a fact my non-tech-savy mother wouldn't understand this video. The words go by too fast.

Also, the microphone/voice has too much echo. Get under a bed blanket. It's too quiet against the music.

Constructive critisism over. Thanks for putting the effort into making this video! We definitely need more of this kind of content which defines just the Fediverse as a single concept, and not just "Mastodon", etc.